inferno’s aftermath

Image from Radio Canada (2018)

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broken shadows across the cracked ground
skeletal corpses of burned trees
rising eerily above
ancient fir forest floor
littered with creatures
choked by the smoke
victims in
wildfire
ash

A nonet is nine lines of poetry, beginning with first line of 9 syllables, second line of 8 syllables…descending to one line of 1 syllable. The first line of my nonet is taken from W. S. Merwin’s poem, To the Light of September. I am linking to dVerse poets pub where Laura hosts tonight…

22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Dora
    Sep 18, 2020 @ 14:14:20

    Broken … skeletal … choked: wonderfully poetic evocations of the theme.

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  2. purplepeninportland
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 19:56:31

    Gorgeous nonet, Lynn!

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 15:02:05

    That line really lends itself to the disasters of fire… so sad.

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  4. Jane Dougherty
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 14:21:39

    Terrible images and such a waste.

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  5. Helen Dehner
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 11:49:36

    Here in Central Oregon, choked with smoke we grieve the loss of our forests, wildlife, humans. It is just too overwhelming. Your poem is sobering and true.

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  6. rivrvlogr
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 09:28:09

    Very timely, and appropriate.

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  7. Laura Bloomsbury
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 08:03:40

    oh dear – such a sad and catastrophic scene you conjured in so few words with this Nonet
    (1 picky point – line 2 is 7 syllables rather than 8 – perhaps an adjective in front of trees needed or some such to pad it out 1 more)

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  8. kim881
    Sep 16, 2020 @ 02:21:13

    A haunting image, Lynn, which is even more so because it is what many Americans are waking up to every day.

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  9. msjadeli
    Sep 15, 2020 @ 21:37:15

    Your poem is haunting and creates a very clear visual of what’s probably there in those burning forests.

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  10. Lucy
    Sep 15, 2020 @ 20:50:37

    Oh, wow. I can taste the smoke and ash in the final few lines. This is so horrifying what happens today, and you communicate that hauntingly.

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  11. revivedwriter
    Sep 15, 2020 @ 20:47:55

    Your words describe a stark scene, all too real in some areas.

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