haiku with ocean view

 

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relentless as time

winds blow, tides swell, breakers foam

shifting sands of shore

 

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. moondustwriter's avatar moondustwriter
    Aug 04, 2014 @ 01:10:27

    nature has such a different sense of time doesnt it?
    Beautiful words

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  2. Chèvrefeuille's avatar Chèvrefeuille
    Aug 03, 2014 @ 23:04:07

    Time and movement in one haiku melted into unity … what a wonderful haiku Lynn Dianne …

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  3. ManicDdaily's avatar ManicDdaily
    Jan 26, 2014 @ 15:13:43

    Very clever title – and I love the sand of the shore and the sands of time conflated. k.

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 26, 2014 @ 15:02:53

    What a great image.. the relentless moving of sand… I can really see it in front of me

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