beloved antithesis

antithesis |anˈtiTHəsis| noun (pl. antitheses |-ˌsēz| )
a person or thing that is the direct opposite of someone or something else:  love is the antithesis of selfishness.  

blond boy born of summer
winter’s brown-haired girl
both blue-eyed

raised like corn from rural soil
born and bred in city lights
single sibling each

staring out school windows
curling up in library chair
home-school sons

cold, plugs in a heater
hot, flips on the fan
warm embrace

shuts off the radio
cranks up the music
concerts together

loves bright sunshine
adores soft moonlight
playful shadows

he will order a beer
she prefers glass of wine
sharing a sip

straight meat and potatoes
mix veggies with pasta
time for dessert

irreconcilable differences
might be reconciled
by love’s heartbeat

(Linking to D’Verse where Bjorn is hosting MTB: “antithesis”)

20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo
    May 15, 2015 @ 13:32:01

    So much story here. LOVE this line:
    “raised like corn from rural soil”

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  2. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura
    May 15, 2015 @ 13:07:34

    Sun and moon, wine and beer, meat and veggies – the similarities of being children together and then adulthood with its choices….opposites attract and not all differences have to go unresolved. Love that last stanza.

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  3. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    May 15, 2015 @ 12:30:35

    Ah.. the opposites of attraction.. no the voice.. yes the silence.. no the song.. of bees and birds.. who do the circle.. in diversity of life.. ah the differences.. are the blessings of love and hate.. and all between.. of all of diversity.. now that’s life..:)

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  4. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    May 15, 2015 @ 11:51:37

    This prompt really brought out some of your best, Lynn!

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  5. Mary's avatar Mary
    May 15, 2015 @ 11:04:43

    Well, it sounds like they had some similarities, but their differences got in the way. I like the point at the end….that if ‘love’s heartbeat’ ruled, differences probably would not have mattered.

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  6. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus
    May 15, 2015 @ 09:28:37

    Actually opposites do attract, & the differences in their personal & world views only enrich, albeit complicate, their relationship. Sometimes, perhaps too often, we seek finding ourselves in our mate & friends (does Mick & Bianca Jagger ring a bell?) which stretches self-love to absurdity; just saying.

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  7. Misky's avatar Misky
    May 15, 2015 @ 05:59:13

    Lovely! I was involved almost immediately with your characters.

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  8. el34ax7's avatar el34ax7
    May 15, 2015 @ 04:55:22

    Like Bjorn, I found the opposites attract motif. The ending, an apparent divorce, was refreshing in that this axiom is often used to highlight relationship successes.

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  9. dellclover's avatar DELL CLOVER
    May 15, 2015 @ 03:57:05

    Ahhhh, YES!

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  10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    May 15, 2015 @ 01:27:00

    This seems to illustrate the saying of opposites attract. Especially the contrast between the sun and moon worked for me. 😉

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