(Join d’Verse Poets writing “echo” poems…and enjoy reading!)
who may come?
anyone
run as a child
wild
come humble
stumble
from shrouded night
fright
into living light
sight
come poor and needy
lovesick, greedy
come dirty and mean
be clean
hungry, thirsty, or chilled
be filled
come with your doubt
re-route
lay out your fleece
peace
the hour is near
here!
a poem in my pocket 
Aug 14, 2015 @ 19:59:18
Cute
Aug 14, 2015 @ 18:25:26
Ah.. hour of now near hear now
Bow
Present greaTest gift wow
Pow
Power Force Ten Blend
Spend..:)
Aug 14, 2015 @ 19:06:40
Thanks for reading! An invitation not to be refused 🙂
Aug 14, 2015 @ 17:36:16
Sounds like a place where everyone is welcome….
The echos create an uplifting rhythm. Enjoyed this. 🙂
Aug 14, 2015 @ 19:05:00
Yes, everyone who accepts invitation is welcome 🙂
Aug 14, 2015 @ 15:00:52
There is a wisdom in that responding voice.. Truly like it.
Aug 14, 2015 @ 16:37:35
Glad you like it, Bjorn!
Aug 14, 2015 @ 14:28:17
I like the theme of this and the almost skipping quality of it. childlike but very wise.
Aug 14, 2015 @ 16:36:53
I hoped it’s winsome…”skipping quality” yes, thanks!
Aug 14, 2015 @ 13:33:08
Such short, short verses and you make them work so well (I admire you, I can never do that without sounding trite). Particular favourites:
come dirty and mean
be clean
hungry, thirsty, or chilled
be filled
come with your doubt
re-route
Aug 14, 2015 @ 13:46:04
Thank you, Marina, for your compliment!
Aug 14, 2015 @ 13:04:15
Love the energy in this beautiful piece 🙂
Aug 14, 2015 @ 12:30:12
Great energy & insight here, & the spritely echoes are very well designed & executed; terrific use of the prompt as your politics shine through.
Aug 14, 2015 @ 13:51:23
Thank you kindly, Glenn 🙂
Aug 14, 2015 @ 11:31:30
Well done! Ditto what Mary said.
Aug 14, 2015 @ 10:04:58
You have worked the form well. I like the last four lines especially!
Aug 14, 2015 @ 13:48:12
Thanks for introducing me to the “echo” form, Mary!