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Turkish peninsula is favored tourist destination. Rent a sailboat at local marina and explore a nearby cove’s cerulean waters, surrounded by lush green hills of olive, tangerine and palm trees. Or stroll the narrow, pebbly beach below Bodrum’s charming white stone houses with mud-thatched flat roofs. Swim with the fish by day, dance under stars by night.

body washed on beach
dinghy overturns in crossing
weep with refugees

http://wewelcomerefugees.com

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  1. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com's avatar http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
    Sep 09, 2015 @ 03:21:02

    Oh woeful fate. The haiku is such a shock after the tranquil prose. But we should keep being shocked until a solution is found.

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-Wade's avatar Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)
    Sep 09, 2015 @ 02:55:45

    A telling contrast!

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  3. Sumana Roy's avatar Sumana Roy
    Sep 09, 2015 @ 01:08:09

    the haiku is stunning & fills us with deep sadness….

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  4. Mary's avatar Mary
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 18:20:35

    So sad…I think many of us weep with the refugees; hopefully there will be a way to change tears into action.

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  5. X (@Xpoet73)'s avatar X (@Xpoet73)
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 16:36:39

    Ugh. How sad our reality is.
    The tourist brochure prose, creates a startling contrast
    in the haiku.

    Heart
    Breaking.

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  6. Linda L. Kruschke's avatar Linda Kruschke
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 14:39:47

    First, I love that you used the word cerulean. It’s such a great word, a beautiful blue. Second, you really surprised me with the haiku at the end. You’ve created an excellent contrast between the dream of a vacation and the reality of what is happening with the refugees right now. Good job. Peace, Linda

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 12:30:59

    The strength is so much in the contrast.. I felt it coming when you talked about the beauty of Turkey.. great to read this hard-hitting haibun

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  8. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 12:19:54

    You and Sumana have written beautiful and powerful haibun on this tragedy. I too appreciate the sharp contrast between the two parts of your poem.

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  9. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 11:40:29

    So true again at the end with Lynn..
    touristy often reigns at price
    of human slaves.. where
    amusing ways price
    above human blood..

    Aylan’s ashes live
    in places
    far away…

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  10. Grace's avatar Grace
    Sep 08, 2015 @ 11:19:29

    The tourist prose is in a sharp contrast with the weeping haiku ~ Sadly the vision of that body stays with us ~

    A relevant haibun Lynn ~ Thanks for joining us for Haibun Monday ~

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