nose-talgia

 

if you die,

let me keep a

favorite piece of

your worn clothing

to hang in guest closet,

or lay folded in deep drawer

when i’m lonely, i will pull it

out to touch a precious memory

cuddle softly round my neck

bury face in warm texture

dampen with my tears

smell your love

once again.

 

 

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bodhirose's avatar Bodhirose
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 22:18:15

    I think this is a common practice to keep an article of clothing of someone we’ve lost. A tender, bitter-sweet poem.

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  2. Candace's avatar Candy
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 18:57:05

    sniff,sniff. this is so beautiful and full of a sad truth. loved the title too

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  3. Sanaa Rizvi's avatar Sanaa Rizvi
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 18:49:55

    This brought tears to my eyes.. such a tender poem.

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  4. Mary's avatar Mary
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 18:47:49

    I understand the sentiments here, Lynn! The scent of someone lasts for quite a while….. My mother kept a shirt of my dad’s for quite a while.

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 16:57:44

    Love the title too smiles ~ This is a sweet remembrance of that scent of our loved ones ~

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  6. Polly's avatar Polly
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 16:47:30

    Been there…you know the rest…

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  7. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 16:32:20

    Great minds & all that, with your Nose-stalgia & my Nosescape. I wonder how long the departed one’s scent can linger sealed up? Excellent take on the prompt, leaving me both sad & smiling for you (or your character poetically).

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  8. kanzensakura's avatar kanzensakura
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 15:22:10

    Truly true. I have a tee shirt kept carefully in quadrupled Ziploc baggies that after all these years smell of sandalwood aftershave….and once in a blue moon, I take it out and inhale deeply. This poem truly resonated with me.

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  9. Bryan Ens's avatar Bryan Ens
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 15:17:27

    Very clever title…and such a wonderful poem…love the last 2 lines “smell your love once again”. Heart-breaking in a way, and yet heart-warming too!

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  10. kelly's avatar kelly
    Jan 05, 2016 @ 15:08:22

    Love the title right off… and you left me with a smile, imagining the smell of love.

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