hot news flash

 

in your recipe for spousal stew

will you

even notice i’m on a slow burn?

please turn

me over so that i will brown

(heat down)

lightly and evenly all around

i’ve begun to sweat

broiled into a fret

will you please turn the heat down?!

 


Linking to dVerse Poets where we’re invited to write an “ovillejo” or tight little bundle (of yarn), which is untangled in the final line…

 

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Waltermarks's avatar Waltermarks
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 17:44:58

    My wife let’s me know to turn down the thermostat daily. You have our ears and warm our hearts.

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  2. Bodhirose's avatar Bodhirose
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 17:29:35

    Ha, I love this, really fun…though sweaty. 🙂

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  3. Linda L. Kruschke's avatar Linda Kruschke
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 15:54:51

    Nice little piece you’ve written. 🙂 Peace, Linda

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  4. Misky's avatar Misky
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 10:12:35

    Deliciously funny!

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi's avatar Sanaa Rizvi
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 07:30:56

    Hot! 😀 love the humor based on real life circumstances 🙂

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  6. Mary's avatar Mary
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 07:18:57

    Ha, this made me laugh! (But I guess based on reality…ha ha)

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  7. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 07:10:35

    I love the hot slow burn ~ Nice metaphor for relationships too 🙂

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 05:50:05

    Ha.. isn’t the truth… after all those years together you would imagine that your thermostats are synced…

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  9. Debi's avatar georgeplace2013
    Jan 15, 2016 @ 05:06:10

    I completely agree! That first line is great and your last.

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  10. whimsygizmo's avatar whimsygizmo
    Jan 14, 2016 @ 21:51:26

    Oh!
    OH! How perfect. What a fun, hot little piece. 🙂

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