inheritance

 

Mother died, age twenty-five

(of flu-asthma complication)

I, barely 16 months & weaned,

bereft.  of primal-love relation.

 

Passed fears of childhood years

(growing up with best-step brother)

when mom’s older sister said to me,

“you remind me of your mother.”

 

“Oh, tell me how, right now” I cried

breath-bated wait for answer

she smiled at me and said, ”I see

it’s plain-obvious in your manner,

 

Voice like hers & when you speak

your hands move just as hers had”

precious-treasure words I heard…

while mirror says I look like dad!

 

 

Kim is hosting inherited “body image” poetics prompt at dVerse Poets

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30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ZurkPoetry's avatar ZurkPoetry
    Aug 08, 2018 @ 02:19:59

    What a beautiful poem. Inherited mannerisms are such a link to the past, my Dad often tells me I have the mannerisms of his Dad, who I’ve never met.

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  2. vidyatiru's avatar vidyatiru
    Apr 30, 2018 @ 14:47:42

    So beautiful and touching….and i truly treasure those remarks people make when they say i am like my parents in some way or the other :)….

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  3. janicead's avatar janicead
    Apr 29, 2018 @ 10:02:37

    I understand your poem very well. My dad’s mom passed when he was four. Her sister would say to my dad, “If you want to know what Mae looked like just look at your daughter.” And we had photos to prove it.

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  4. Gina@alifelesslived's avatar Singledust
    Apr 26, 2018 @ 05:51:10

    for your mum to be remembered reflected by the way you move and be is so touching

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