to be human

08 Jun 2018 9 Comments

by lynn__ in Uncategorized

 

i am not a beast

i am not genderless

i am not invincible

i am not a victim

i am not innocent

i am not perfect

i am not alone

 

i am a holy breath

i am engendered

i am vulnerable

i am an overcomer

i am forgiven

i am in process

i am connected

 

Linking to dVerse Poets pub…cheers!

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sarah Russell's avatar Sarah Russell
    Jun 10, 2018 @ 14:42:15

    I like the contrasting stanzas here, Lynn.

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  2. Waltermarks's avatar Waltermarks
    Jun 08, 2018 @ 19:47:55

    Amen Lynn, you are so connected!

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  3. kaykuala's avatar mhmp77
    Jun 08, 2018 @ 19:41:23

    kaykuala

    i am connected

    This is a strong statement in the present. Glad that you mentioned it lynn! One has to be or be left behind

    Hank

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  4. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny
    Jun 08, 2018 @ 13:42:45

    Nice comparison between the negative and positive stanzas.

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  5. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr
    Jun 08, 2018 @ 12:10:58

    I love this contrast of qualities. Awesome!

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jun 08, 2018 @ 09:11:08

    The contrasts works so well… so many things we are not as humans…

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