summer evening


longing for the grass
at the bottom of the pool
those fireflies.

© Buson

longing for the grass
blades wave under prairie wind
rustle in ditches

at bottom of pool
crawdads and minnows asleep
moon passes over

elusive fireflies
hide in long grasses near pond
flicker on and off

© lynn


Image and troiku challenge celebrating Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s 7th anniversary!

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. rothpoetry
    Nov 01, 2019 @ 08:20:26

    I love how you expanded this… Great job!


  2. kim881
    Oct 30, 2019 @ 02:35:57

    You’ve created an idyllic scene, here Lynn! I particularly like the contrast between the rustling grass and the silence of the flickering fireflies.


  3. M.B. Henry
    Oct 29, 2019 @ 16:18:27

    Yes, those fireflies! 🙂 Love it.


  4. Becoming His Tapestry
    Oct 29, 2019 @ 14:13:18

    Lynn, you are so good at this 🙂 You inspire me 🙂 God bless you


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