if one drafts blueprints for a lovely home
you must consider every detail well,
for family and friends to feel welcome
and when you leave the property will sell.
place windows to allow natural light
yet insulate to conserve energy
do you want doors a standard width and height?
should you design with perfect symmetry?
plan how to best use space in every room
a basement or a second floor include?
back deck or outdoor patio presume
to bring fresh air and set a pleasant mood
’tis folly if foundation’s not secure
stability of residence… be sure!
True for building a house, a life, or a nation. Join the follies at dVerse 🙂
Oct 28, 2020 @ 03:33:37
Nicely done, it’s almost like an allegory of the human condition, especially today.
Oct 28, 2020 @ 13:54:44
Thank you, Francis. Perhaps I came to the underlying issue through the back door…so to speak.
Oct 28, 2020 @ 02:37:56
It sounds like you have things well planned out. I think such a property could be a fine family home and sell well afterwards!
Oct 28, 2020 @ 13:57:41
Thank you, Ingrid. Our youngest son is an associate architect and is drawing house plans 🙂
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:00:10
😊
Oct 27, 2020 @ 22:04:08
Very well written Lynn. Sounds like you have experience in designing and building a house. You are right all that is folly without a good foundation!
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:03:17
Thanks for your comments, Dwight! We in the dreaming/drafting stage of a possible future home 🙂
Oct 28, 2020 @ 16:12:32
Wonderful. I hope it works out for you!
Oct 28, 2020 @ 17:39:27
Thanks, Dwight 🙂
Oct 27, 2020 @ 21:49:26
Lynn, I like the way you methodically walks us through the finer points of constructing a house just to remind us of the need for a solid foundation. Without it, all else is folly indeed! (Nicely constructed poem!)
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:04:20
I appreciate you coming to view the construction site of my poem, Dora!
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:25:29
My pleasure!
Oct 27, 2020 @ 21:06:45
kaykuala
’tis folly if foundation’s not secure
stability of residence… be sure!
Sometimes the basics are found wanting and the whole endeavor is compromised!
Wonderful sonnet lynn!
Hank
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:05:16
Thank you, Hank!
Oct 27, 2020 @ 19:04:31
Love this, without that firm foundation, the building will fail
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:06:00
Yes, like Jesus’ parable of house built on sand!
Oct 27, 2020 @ 18:30:53
Foundation is everything when it comes to both.. building a house and a relationship 💝
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:06:33
That is for certain…thanks for your comment!
Oct 27, 2020 @ 15:59:07
Oh yes… you cannot have it all without a solid foundation.
Oct 28, 2020 @ 14:08:19
Absolutely!
Oct 27, 2020 @ 15:52:41
Lynn, important considerations for “a house, a life, a nation.” It reminds me of my year of anatomy and physiology in college (pre-nursing that I never went on to become a nurse with) my professor always emphasized “complementarity of structure and function.” A home built on folly might be fun in the doing, but will it shelter you in the long run?
Oct 27, 2020 @ 15:54:32
Excellent question, Lisa…thanks.
Oct 27, 2020 @ 15:41:24
Very lovely piece here, Lynn. Without a set foundation, as you imply, it will all fall down. Excellent writing.
Oct 27, 2020 @ 15:44:21
Thank you, Lucy! I appreciate your comments.