into tiny coffins

christmas should be the merriest day on the isles but i,
tiny feathered creature, must silence my celebration as i am
aware of the bloody tradition of st. stephen’s, the martyr, a
mere desecrated day after the holy day, when every student
of ritual hunting will practice taking deadly aim of
us, sweetly innocent singers we, wee little wrens.

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Baby Wrens’ Voices by Thomas R. Smith

I am a student of wrens.
When the mother bird returns
to her brood, beak squirming
with winged breakfast, a shrill
clamor rises like jingling
from tiny, high-pitched bells.
Who’d have guessed such a small
house contained so many voices?
The sound they make is the pure sound
of life’s hunger. Who hangs our house
in the world’s branches, and listens
when we sing from our hunger?
Because I love best those songs
that shake the house of the singer,
I am a student of wrens.
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Melissa Lemay hosts dVerse poetics this week and prompts us to write poems related to animals and Christmas (not the usual animals associated with the Nativity). I wrote a "golden shovel" poem, ending each line with a word from phrase taken from Thomas R. Smith's poem above.

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. The Amethyst Lamb's avatar The Amethyst Lamb
    Jan 05, 2024 @ 09:34:06

    I didn’t know about this tradition. Poor babies. 😢

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  2. Dora's avatar dorahak
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 09:34:21

    Such a cruel custom, Lynn. I had never heard of it.

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  3. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 06:44:59

    How wonderful that you contrasted the silence of the wrens (for protection) with the noisiness of babies clamoring for food. I think it works really well and shares a meaningful message.

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  4. Grace's avatar Grace
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 06:29:21

    Beautiful acrostic end poem. I love the message though I feel sad for the wrens.

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  5. Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 05:12:05

    I’m glad you tried out a golden shovel! It works too. You took another aspect of the bird, completely different to the ‘student’s’ angle, but so important to the wren.

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 03:08:43

    It is so cruel… but knowing the wrens from their song I find it hard to kill them as they are so elusive…

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  7. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Dec 14, 2023 @ 00:49:12

    Aw!!! so sad for the wrens.

    Much♡love

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