beware the teddy bear

“Hope is not a resting place but a starting point – a cactus, not a cushion.” -H.Jackson Brown Jr.

camping adjacent to saguaro national park
gave access to the park trails so we followed
path past park bench to fork and rock painted
with words: far west trail. another fork and a sign
painted with a loop and you are here. “let’s follow
the loop,” i said, not knowing how far it led away
before leading us back again.

desert introductions are intriguing as we met
various species of cacti: prickly pear and purple
prickly pear, majestic saguaro (some pointing the way
with crooked arms and others on their way out, dry ribs
exposed), ocotillo, and barrels in bloom. “i’m tired,” he
said and pretended to sit on a barrel. unaware, we were
ankle ambushed by a teddy bear cholla, ow!

maybe desert is hostile environment after all with
water and daylight running low, we fear we’re only
ones still out on trails…how cold does it get at night?
did we miss a fork or is it up ahead? met a guy walking
his dogs and he reassures us, “it’s 300 yards ahead to the
fork.” we find hope and the park bench at sunset, footsore
after 7.9 miles round trip from home on wheels.

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Mar 08, 2024 @ 14:24:31

    What a journey! I love the descriptions of the cacti, especially “prickly pear and purple
    prickly pear, majestic saguaro (some pointing the way
    with crooked arms and others on their way out, dry ribs
    exposed)”

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  2. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Mar 04, 2024 @ 12:58:43

    I so enjoyed this, Lynn. Must have been quite a trip.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Mar 03, 2024 @ 08:53:00

    I do remember those teddybear cholla from when I lived in the desert… on my first ever desert walk I met some people and one of them had stumbled into on on those… fortunately I had just bought a leatherman tool so I helped them by lending them the pliers to get the spines out.

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  4. pvcann's avatar pvcann
    Mar 03, 2024 @ 07:03:18

    A beautiful scene and enjoyed the narrative too.

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  5. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Mar 03, 2024 @ 03:50:18

    Luv the way you described the saguro in your trek wanting direction guidance.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much♡love

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  6. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Mar 02, 2024 @ 21:07:15

    That was quite a hike, Lynn. Glad you made it back safely before dark.
    Sounds like an interesting trip.

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  7. Mish's avatar Mish
    Mar 02, 2024 @ 19:20:22

    Oh those saguaro cacti are magnificent. I like the personification of “some pointing the way with crooked arms”. The desert does have that intimidating side to it, especially as night creeps in. I had a good chuckle with the barrel cactus. Not a good cushion at all!

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