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Three sunbathing sisters from Spain
grew tired of rain on the plain;
trio traveled to beach
but feared dark hair would bleach
so learned yoga to ease mental pain.
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Linking to dVerse poets where Melissa invites us to write poetic response to Picasso…
Jun 17, 2025 @ 14:21:12
I’m happy they found a way to relax.
Jun 18, 2025 @ 07:07:21
Me too…time at the beach is good for anyone 🙂
Jun 06, 2025 @ 19:02:03
Very creative limerick, Lynn!
Jun 07, 2025 @ 07:59:01
Thank you Sara 🙂
Jun 05, 2025 @ 11:18:52
Haha!I laughed and laughed! Very well done!
Jun 05, 2025 @ 13:53:22
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Ain!
Jun 05, 2025 @ 08:49:59
Ha… I thought you paid to get your hair bleached 🙂
Jun 05, 2025 @ 13:08:00
You’re right, Bjorn 😅
Jun 05, 2025 @ 03:35:20
I love that you called them ‘twisted sisters’, Lynn, and the ekphrastic limerick worked well, as did the ‘rain on the plain’ reference.
Jun 05, 2025 @ 06:06:23
Thanks for reading, Kim. It was fun to write!
Jun 05, 2025 @ 08:56:38
My pleasure, Lynn.
Jun 05, 2025 @ 00:50:14
Love the playful rhythm here, Lynn! That twist on “the rain in Spain” made me grin.
Much love,
David
Jun 05, 2025 @ 06:09:30
Glad you enjoyed it, David 😍
Jun 05, 2025 @ 06:10:02
🤗
Jun 04, 2025 @ 23:39:38
An absolute delight …. short and oh so sweet.
Jun 05, 2025 @ 06:10:46
thank you, Helen 🤩