to live in snow globe

winter night’s velvet-soft silence

shaken…

startle-dark rumble of snow thunder births

frosty six-pointed stars in original designs

       to flutter-twirl down…

                 graceful ballet dancers

dressed in dazzle-white tutus,

       falling into drifts…

their collective diamond-glitter fluff reflects

as sun’s morning rays break into joyful applause!

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Kim invites dVerse poets to write about our experience of snow…or the way i like to experience it 🙂

24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sanaarizvi's avatar sanaarizvi
    Jan 21, 2026 @ 10:10:40

    Such wonderful snow imagery here, Lynn! 🥰

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  2. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin
    Jan 21, 2026 @ 07:11:39

    love it Lynn. Applauding 👏🏽

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 21, 2026 @ 03:47:13

    Oh I love the way snowflakes look… if we could just look at its beauty more.

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  4. Brendan's avatar Brendan
    Jan 21, 2026 @ 03:46:36

    Maybe poetry is a snow globe, gazing at experience through a glass. The scene here is rendered so gracefully without the cold.

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  5. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jan 21, 2026 @ 03:11:03

    I couldn’t live in a snow globe, I’m not a lover of snow, but this is a lovely metaphor, Lynn: ‘winter night’s velvet-soft silence shaken’ and I love all the compound words: startle-dark’, ‘flutter-twirl’, ‘dazzle-white’ and ‘diamond-glitter’, and the way the ‘snow thunder births frosty six-pointed stars’. Applause!

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  6. zumpoems's avatar zumpoems
    Jan 20, 2026 @ 20:34:19

    Excelllent — from title to the snow imagery!

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  7. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox
    Jan 20, 2026 @ 20:00:41

    A happy snow poem, Lynn.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    🎇much love

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  8. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Jan 20, 2026 @ 19:46:26

    Beautiful description of snow, Lynn. I imagine you get lots of it in Iowa!

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  9. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    Jan 20, 2026 @ 19:04:18

    So beautiful from the inside looking out 😂

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  10. Helen's avatar Helen
    Jan 20, 2026 @ 17:59:22

    I love your version of snow, Lynn. A beautiful write!!

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