just a phrase

looking
lean, long, lanky

acting
awkwardly acned

dressing
down dramatically

feeling
fatigued fashionably

ogling
opposites obsessively

expressing
existence excitedly

managing
muddles messily

seeking
social stratus status

realizing
religious rumblings

tripping
teenaged tumblings


Melissa hosts “turning a phrase” poetics at dVerse Poets today.

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. shaun tenzenmen's avatar shaun tenzenmen
    Mar 05, 2026 @ 06:01:58

    Managing muddles messily seems to describe certain news events recently. Thankfully, it’s only in an inconsequential third world country. 😉Lovely and alliterative, Lynne 👏

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  2. authorstew's avatar authorstew
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 19:26:01

    Nicely done.

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  3. Lynne's avatar Lynne
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 17:59:12

    well done! BIG SMILES.

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  4. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 16:51:14

    Fabulously done. Spot-on, too!

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  5. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 16:13:52

    Very nice, Lynn!

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  6. kim881's avatar kim881
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 03:17:46

    Alliterative, phrasal, and nicely paced, Lynn! You’ve captured ‘teenaged tumblings’ well.

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  7. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta
    Mar 04, 2026 @ 02:51:45

    Great example of the form Lynn and the alliteration is very effective

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  8. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Mar 03, 2026 @ 22:35:13

    So many great phrases here. I don’t miss the teenage years, and at the same time I get ready to enter them again with my own children!

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