comatose to sin

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trapped in cold death-like torpor
reptilian claws
aggressive if awakened
fallen out of eden’s tree
posting poetic prose
20 Feb 2026 Leave a comment
in senryu Tags: ashes, death, tree, sin, eden, iguana, comatose, torpor
comatose to sin

trapped in cold death-like torpor
reptilian claws
aggressive if awakened
fallen out of eden’s tree
21 Mar 2023 13 Comments
in triolet Tags: agua, iguana, Nicaragua, paradise, travel
life may seem perfect in paradise
but don’t drink the agua in managua
when you travel abroad, cheles, be wise
life may seem perfect in paradise
both piety and poverty wear a disguise
tourist trap market maze sells smells of iguana
life may seem perfect in paradise
but don’t drink the agua in managua

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“Agua” is water and “cheles” refers to light-skinned people. A triolet is a poem with 8 lines and ABaAabAB rhyme/repeat scheme.
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