in retro-spect

Lost Moments  2012 artwork by Nick Gentry

Lost Moments 2012
artwork by Nick Gentry

it was the hot summer of ’59

the heat dragged on and on;

migrants sweated in the fields,

youth rumbled in parking lots

after cruising’ saturday night.

bobby left me for a prettier girl

but i didn’t care;  i’d have a

smoke, quick slick a rat tail

comb thru my cropped hair

and find me a better boy,

one who really understood

what was inside me, yeah.

 

 

Thanks to Nick Gentry, http://www.nickgentry.com

for sharing his artistic inspiration with d’Verse poets today.

17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 10:43:19

    In 1959, I was a sophomore in high school, just beginning to afford some tentative double-dating, anxious to turn 16, to get my own hot rod, to lose my virginity, & of all things to explore creative writing, especially poetry–letting Whitman lead the way; nice take on the prompt; nailed the image, kept my interest all the way.

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  2. Mary's avatar Mary
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 09:55:51

    Really enjoyed the reflection on the summer of ’59!! I definitely could hear ‘her’ voice!

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  3. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 09:38:55

    I enjoyed the positive attitude and tone in your poem, Lynn!

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  4. bmiller007 (@bmiller007)'s avatar bmiller007 (@bmiller007)
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 05:55:22

    you gave her a story…i wonder if the strength in her voice is a face to cover up some hurt…or if she really has that kinda sass…cool character sketch

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  5. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 05:51:13

    I admire the retro flashback Lynn ~ You captured that hot summer of 59 ~ Thanks for participating and wishing you Happy New Year ~

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  6. Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)'s avatar Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 02:38:25

    I can see those words coming from her mouth – great observation and take on the prompt 🙂

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 01:04:18

    Imagine having a recording of oneself.. Love the way to forge ahead and not dwell… Maybe it was easier back then, when the history was not recorded in Instagram and facebook…

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  8. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com's avatar http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
    Jan 07, 2015 @ 00:50:06

    You infiltrated the model and came up with some stunning words. I remember that summer very well – I was painting my Austin 7 (1934) a weird shade of green, painstakingly rubbing down with glasspaper between about 20 coats of cellulose, and It was overwhelmingly hot work. No time for finding fellers!

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  9. billgncs's avatar billgncs
    Jan 06, 2015 @ 23:25:47

    I can see this poem in the picture – you really found it. Nice

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  10. Sabio Lantz's avatar Sabio Lantz
    Jan 06, 2015 @ 22:08:00

    fascinating retro monologue

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