when leaves have wings

(dreamstime: royalty free stock photo)(dreamstime image)

flock of black starlings

dark shapes clinging to bare tree

now leaves fall…skyward! 

 


Kristjaan shares his knowledge and experience at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai ...my haiku today tries to incorporate the element of “surprise”

 

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Herman's avatar Herman
    Mar 29, 2015 @ 07:36:45

    Hi Lynn. Thank you for visiting and following HoB. Much appreciated!

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  2. Baigneur des Bois's avatar Yer Forest Pirate
    Mar 28, 2015 @ 13:59:13

    VERY clever!

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  3. Chèvrefeuille's avatar Chèvrefeuille
    Mar 26, 2015 @ 09:37:54

    You really did surprise me with that turning uposide down image you have used in your haiku. Great haiga.

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  4. Mark M. Redfearn's avatar Mark M. Redfearn
    Mar 26, 2015 @ 07:09:53

    An unexpected fall!

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Mar 26, 2015 @ 05:01:00

    They do indeed leave… like leaves.

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  6. Paloma's avatar Jen
    Mar 25, 2015 @ 20:42:30

    Very, very cool! I love this! 😀

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