screech on hold

Sharing today with d’Verse poetics prompt on nature’s micro worlds…

 
young owlet

fell from tree

when trimmed

fluttering low

unable to fly

high as his

worried parent

yet doesn’t try

to fight my

son’s firm grip

of gloved hand

around his

warm body

heartbeats…

 

grey fuzziness

luminous eyes

already wise

clicks to scold

the camera

turns neck far

to stare in all

directions:

where’s mama?

carry him oh

so gently back

to nearbyย spruce

for a few more

flying lessons.

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photo by lynn

25 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bryan Ens's avatar Bryan Ens
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 23:29:16

    those owls do, indeed, look so wise. Hope the young owlet has been studying hard so he can get his pilot’s license!

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  2. ayala zarfjian (@ayalazarfjian)'s avatar ayala zarfjian (@ayalazarfjian)
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 19:30:33

    Lynn, lovely we both wrote about owls. I see them almost every day and I feel such awe every time. ๐Ÿ™‚ great pic ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar Victoria C. Slotto
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 19:18:19

    Wow. Quite an experience for the little owlet and for you.

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  4. X (@Xpoet73)'s avatar X (@Xpoet73)
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 19:03:12

    That is pretty cool that you got to see the owl upclose, and I am glad that you were there to take care of it. I guess the owl knewsomething about you not to fight it.

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  5. writerwannabe763's avatar writerwannabe763
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 18:40:04

    Beautiful poem… ‘fiction’ or ‘non’ … It seems real……….. Diane

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  6. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 18:12:32

    How.. sweet the owl.. of orange glowed glove.. holding
    eyes so wise and warm.. the Universe.. sings refrain
    of who.. so who.. so who.. rings true in
    capture of love.. returns.. in
    owl of orange glove way..:)

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  7. Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)'s avatar Desmond, Anthony (@iamEPanthony)
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 18:11:33

    awe – amazing! sweet that the lil owl didn’t fight you guys. I’d love to have the experience of holding my favorite animal

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  8. wolfsrosebud's avatar wolfsrosebud
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 17:53:58

    so cool… it’s those daily interactions with nature that surprise and delight us

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  9. Glenn Buttkus's avatar Glenn Buttkus
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 17:31:40

    The incident has the ring of authenticity, natural beauty, a child’s sense of wonder, & the maternal heart that scan the world with mama-eyes. Of course, it could fiction, whimsy, good imagination–part of the mystic of good poetics. I, for one, care not, because the power of your words catapulted me into that place in your sphere.

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  10. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jun 02, 2015 @ 17:20:39

    Wow, that is an amazing picture ~ I am envious of you and Ayala’s post about the owls ~ You must be living close to nature (far from the city) ~ Thanks for joining in Lynn ~

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