earth’s sweet shadow

 

taste lunar eclipse
oreo cookie slides past
creme filling reveal

 

ID 52721482 © Ronald Pickering | Dreamstime.com

ID 52721482 © Ronald Pickering | Dreamstime.com

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Constance Ann Morrison's avatar Constance Ann Morrison
    Oct 07, 2015 @ 16:19:58

    Now that I’ve read this poem, I’ll never see an eclipse as anything else!

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  2. ManicDdaily's avatar ManicDdaily
    Oct 06, 2015 @ 07:16:53

    Ha. A sweet filling for sure.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 05, 2015 @ 09:10:50

    I like the reference to cookies, though since I didn’t grew up with them I love the moon more than oreo’s

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  4. claudia's avatar claudia
    Sep 29, 2015 @ 09:49:58

    oh nice… loving the oreo reference in this..hmmm… you made the moon even more tasty with this

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