earth’s sweet shadow


taste lunar eclipse
oreo cookie slides past
creme filling reveal


ID 52721482 © Ronald Pickering |

ID 52721482 © Ronald Pickering |

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Constance Ann Morrison
    Oct 07, 2015 @ 16:19:58

    Now that I’ve read this poem, I’ll never see an eclipse as anything else!


  2. ManicDdaily
    Oct 06, 2015 @ 07:16:53

    Ha. A sweet filling for sure.


  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Oct 05, 2015 @ 09:10:50

    I like the reference to cookies, though since I didn’t grew up with them I love the moon more than oreo’s


  4. claudia
    Sep 29, 2015 @ 09:49:58

    oh nice… loving the oreo reference in this..hmmm… you made the moon even more tasty with this


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