taking leave(s)

My “tan renga” response to “hokku” at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai…

 

the willow leaves fallen,
the spring gone dry,
rocks here and there

© Yosa Buson (1716-1784)

past memories in scrapbooks
photographic mind fading

(c) lynn__

a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red

© Georgia

final glory of seasons
grief and love in letting go

(c) lynn__

 

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photo by lynn

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille's avatar Chèvrefeuille
    May 11, 2016 @ 20:39:11

    Awesome … two nicely completed Tan Renga Lynn. What a beautiful photo you have enclosed.

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  2. petrujviljoen's avatar petrujviljoen
    May 09, 2016 @ 14:39:37

    Both tan renga are good but admit to liking the second one with Bastet a favourite.

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  3. Irene's avatar Irene
    May 09, 2016 @ 14:23:16

    Nice compilation with taste of seasons and leaves as memory..

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