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1. Candy
   Dec 05, 2016 @ 12:30:12

   This is so joyful!

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2. Baigneur de Fôret
   Dec 05, 2016 @ 11:57:43

   I think it fits the theme very well, and each line is nice, but I think ‘stirring’ in the 3rd line brings the haiku together as one, otherwise it is unconnected happenings.

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   • lynn__
     Dec 05, 2016 @ 12:13:19

     Thanks for your helpful comment…”stirring” will make a 5-syllable pattern too 🙂

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3. B i r g i t t a
   Dec 05, 2016 @ 10:16:13

   I can see the waving fields

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4. Brenda Davis Harsham
   Dec 05, 2016 @ 08:13:20

   Such beautiful music.

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   • lynn__
     Dec 05, 2016 @ 08:22:42

     Yes…classic Nutcracker!

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     • Brenda Davis Harsham
       Dec 05, 2016 @ 10:53:25

       ‘Tis the season!

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