i still do…do you?

 

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  1. Frank Hubeny's avatar frankhubeny
    Jun 16, 2017 @ 16:07:54

    I like the “rhythm in red” at the end which fits the idea of remembering a couple’s magic.

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  2. Portofino's avatar Charley
    Jun 16, 2017 @ 11:49:00

    This poem certainly has a draw… 🙂 I love the play of words you’ve created. Possibly this form frees a poet from being too literal, too descriptive… too prose-aic!

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  3. SBon's avatar nosaintaugustine
    Jun 16, 2017 @ 08:22:58

    Love the wild wet sky and the idea of celebrating time flying, very enjoyable poem!

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  4. Jane Dougherty's avatar Jane Dougherty
    Jun 16, 2017 @ 04:53:17

    Nice one! Saturday is my day to play with the fridge magnets too 🙂

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