This poem certainly has a draw… 🙂 I love the play of words you’ve created. Possibly this form frees a poet from being too literal, too descriptive… too prose-aic!
Love this! And I adore magnetic poetry. Didn’t know there was an online version. I have some that I bought at an old fashioned candy store. My refrigerator currently has, “I love your face” beside pictures of family.
a poem in my pocket 
Jun 16, 2017 @ 16:07:54
I like the “rhythm in red” at the end which fits the idea of remembering a couple’s magic.
Jun 16, 2017 @ 18:06:13
Yes… thanks!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 11:49:00
This poem certainly has a draw… 🙂 I love the play of words you’ve created. Possibly this form frees a poet from being too literal, too descriptive… too prose-aic!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 14:21:40
Thanks…I think you’re right!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 08:22:58
Love the wild wet sky and the idea of celebrating time flying, very enjoyable poem!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 14:23:02
So glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 04:53:17
Nice one! Saturday is my day to play with the fridge magnets too 🙂
Jun 16, 2017 @ 06:38:22
😀
Jun 16, 2017 @ 03:27:51
I love magnetic poetry and you have structured it so very well together.
-HA
Jun 16, 2017 @ 06:30:03
It is fun to try!
Jun 16, 2017 @ 01:19:36
fun..it held a message that is certainly nostalgic and sweet. Who doesn’t remember his/her first love?
Jun 16, 2017 @ 06:29:40
Thanks, Gay…recapturing early memories of marriage 😉
Jun 15, 2017 @ 21:19:46
Love this. Perfect title, too.
Jun 16, 2017 @ 06:24:36
Glad you like it!
Jun 15, 2017 @ 19:29:07
What fun! Great poem, and I’ll be searching out that site. I’ve always wanted to try magnetic poetry, but our refrigerator has no room!
Jun 15, 2017 @ 20:22:58
Enjoy!
Jun 15, 2017 @ 18:31:25
Passionate and ferocious heart ~ Love the online result of this Lynn ~
Jun 15, 2017 @ 19:20:17
Yes, it’s magnetic love ❤️
Jun 15, 2017 @ 18:12:19
The first three lines are very sexy.
Jun 15, 2017 @ 16:35:37
Perfectly executed.
Jun 15, 2017 @ 19:16:34
Thanks much.
Jun 15, 2017 @ 15:58:33
I enjoyed this soo much!❤️
Jun 15, 2017 @ 16:00:05
Glad you liked it, Sanaa 😊
Jun 15, 2017 @ 15:51:03
Rhythm in red… love that when I have the blues.
Jun 15, 2017 @ 15:56:48
YES!
Jun 04, 2017 @ 22:31:05
Love this! And I adore magnetic poetry. Didn’t know there was an online version. I have some that I bought at an old fashioned candy store. My refrigerator currently has, “I love your face” beside pictures of family.
Jun 05, 2017 @ 11:20:52
I enjoy the online version…your fridge magnets sound like fun too 😀