Here I use a haiku by Chevrefeuille to create a “troiku” which is a unique form invented by our host at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. Like a Russian troika, the original haiku is the “sleigh” pulled by the 3 “horses”/haiku verses.
silent night
snow falls softly on the graveyard
the Savior is born
©Chevrefeuille
on a silent night
cold moon casts wolf’s grey shadow
abrupt bunny tracks
_____
snow falls softly on
the graveyard where family
lays fir bough wreath
_____
the Savior is born!
child in manger embodies
resurrection hope
© lynn__
Dec 26, 2017 @ 03:36:15
love how gentle this is! happy holidays, Lynn!
Dec 26, 2017 @ 10:27:54
Thank you 😊 May your new year be blessed!
Dec 26, 2017 @ 21:03:20
Yours too, Lynn! Thank youuu!
Dec 25, 2017 @ 17:45:57
What a beautiful troiku you have created from my haiku. Thank you Lynn__
Dec 25, 2017 @ 20:48:52
My pleasure!
Dec 24, 2017 @ 16:54:58
Wishing you joy and peace on this day of celebrating God with us.
Dec 24, 2017 @ 20:08:29
Thank you, Janice! I pray you’ll be blessed by his presence this Christmas.