scent of spring rides zephyr
snowman has fallen
battle of seasons
scent of spring rides zephyr
sleet dissolves to rain
winter’s last stand
scent of spring rides zephyr
snowman has fallen
A triolet for Weekend Writing Prompt, “fallen”. A triolet consists of 8 lines. Lines1,4 and 7 are the same line repeated. So are lines 2 and 8.
May 08, 2018 @ 12:52:54
Lovely! In fact, I just uploaded a ‘Triolet’ of my own onto my blog. It’s linked below. I’d love it if you would have a look over it and leave me some tips on how to improve. I’m sure I could learn a lot from you. I hope you like it!
https://poeticaparadisum.wordpress.com/2018/05/08/twinkling-stars-triolet/
May 08, 2018 @ 21:18:28
I’m flattered you’d want my opinion…so I will check it out!
Mar 10, 2018 @ 03:53:28
Beautiful triolet, Lynn, full of wonderful imagery, Lynn 🙂
Mar 10, 2018 @ 18:12:31
Thanks, Sammi!
Mar 05, 2018 @ 20:11:30
Love the flow of this and how you use scent to draw us in.
Mar 09, 2018 @ 08:18:40
Thanks, Victoria! I think scent is powerful, triggering emotion and memory.