sweet surrender


scent of spring rides zephyr

snowman has fallen

battle of seasons

scent of spring rides zephyr

sleet dissolves to rain

winter’s last stand

scent of spring rides zephyr

snowman has fallen


A triolet for Weekend Writing Prompt, “fallen”. A triolet consists of 8 lines. Lines1,4 and 7 are the same line repeated. So are lines 2 and 8.


6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Anacrazyfuturewriter
    May 08, 2018 @ 12:52:54

    Lovely! In fact, I just uploaded a ‘Triolet’ of my own onto my blog. It’s linked below. I’d love it if you would have a look over it and leave me some tips on how to improve. I’m sure I could learn a lot from you. I hope you like it!


  2. sammicoxwriter
    Mar 10, 2018 @ 03:53:28

    Beautiful triolet, Lynn, full of wonderful imagery, Lynn 🙂


  3. Victoria C. Slotto
    Mar 05, 2018 @ 20:11:30

    Love the flow of this and how you use scent to draw us in.


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