ominous chill

My attempt at “fusion” prompt (see CDHK) to fuse two haiku into one new one.


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the crow has flown away:

swaying in the evening sun,

a leafless tree.


over the wintry

forest, winds howl in rage

with no leaves to blow.

© Soseki Natsume


raucous wind stirs crows

black “leaves” clinging to bare tree

murderous caws rise

© lynn__






6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. sophia dinola
    Apr 22, 2018 @ 12:26:54

    I like “black leaves clinging”. 🙂


  2. Chèvrefeuille
    Apr 19, 2018 @ 17:33:02

    Strong scene … tough language.


  3. petrujviljoen
    Apr 18, 2018 @ 10:51:20

    The wind being raucous and the crows murderous – I’m staying in tonight!


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