nocturnal meditation

Challenge at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai  to create a“fusion” haiku from the given classic haiku and then create a Troiku series of three with using lines of”fusion” haiku:

the water-fowl
pecks and shivers
the moon on the waves  

© Zuiryu

scooping up the moon
in the wash bassin,
and spilling it                  

© Ryuho

I kept hanging the moon
on the pine tree, and taking it off,
gazing at it the while    

© Hokushi

i gaze at full moon
spilling on ripples of waves,
white egret shimmers

© lynn__

i gaze at full moon
rising thru pine tree’s needles,
caught in silhouette

on ripples of waves,
docked boat gently rocking as
moonlight washes shore

white egret shimmers
while pecking in moon water,
scoops up silver fish

© lynn__

5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    Nov 29, 2018 @ 14:13:03

    Wow Lynn__ what a beautiful response. Chapeau!

    Reply

  2. Frank J. Tassone
    Nov 16, 2018 @ 16:46:57

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #8: Lynn’s latest fusion haiku for Carpe Diem!

    Reply

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