Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s “tan renga” challenge…add 2 lines to original haiku.
waterweed
floating away, despite
the butterfly’s weight on it
© Chiyo-Ni
beauty flits magnificent
but life’s current moves stronger
© lynn__

photo by lynn
posting poetic prose
07 Feb 2019 5 Comments
in tan renga Tags: beauty, life, monarch, waterweed, weight
Carpe Diem Haiku Kai’s “tan renga” challenge…add 2 lines to original haiku.
waterweed
floating away, despite
the butterfly’s weight on it
© Chiyo-Ni
beauty flits magnificent
but life’s current moves stronger
© lynn__
photo by lynn
Feb 11, 2019 @ 19:39:12
Strong words and awesome photo!
Feb 11, 2019 @ 20:39:28
Thanks, Camie! The monarchs migrated through our grove a few years ago so I snapped a lot of pictures.
Feb 11, 2019 @ 21:17:07
I love monarchs!
Feb 11, 2019 @ 21:54:55
Me too 🙂
Feb 08, 2019 @ 01:16:22
True words, Lynn!