yes, deer

11 Mar 2019 4 Comments

by lynn__ in haiku Tags: , , , ,

Chevré at Carpe Diem invites us to dig into archives. Haiku submitted to Lyrical Iowa a couple years ago; not published so posting now, along with photo taken last Sept. in Colorado Springs (added 2 lines to make it a tanka).

 

liquid eyes, white tail

grace notes on musical scale

doe does as does do

 

fans fawning at her beauty

evidence the buck stopped here

 

 

 

IMG_8022

photo by lynn

 

 

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. David C Brown
    Mar 14, 2019 @ 15:30:39

    Good and fun (and a wee bit corny).

    Reply

  2. Angie Sapphire
    Mar 13, 2019 @ 20:02:57

    Beautiful

    Reply

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