unfrazzled

 

Grandma, screen-shot-2019-08-09-at-3.48.13-pm
who bore seven children,
rambunctious and noisy,
marveled
over my great aunt,
who raised six children,
so well-behaved
that following a meal
she would direct them
once
in a very soft voice…
they would immediately
clear the table
and
wash the dishes.

 


A quadrille  (poem of exactly 44 words) for dVerse Poets Pub with De.

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  1. katiemiafrederick's avatar katiemiafrederick
    Aug 15, 2019 @ 18:56:13

    Smiles Perhaps it was
    Genetic Great Aunt
    Introvert and Children
    too.. Grandma
    All Extravert
    And
    Children too
    i’ve surely seen
    this Happen In the
    Loud Half and Silent
    Half of my family too..
    Lord Knows it even Happens
    though among Identical Twins
    my Theory is likely Out of Order too
    Nice to See You Lynn in the Middle Perhaps
    this is a sign
    that i
    will
    End for now too..;)

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