surf’s up!

roaring down the beach
at the height of winter waves
mist clouds

© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)

roaring down the beach
dangerous surf erases
beachcombers’ footprints

at the height of winter waves
surfers in wet suits compete
catch wave or wipe out

mist clouds
rise as waves surge against cliffs
salt spray drenches rocks

© Lynn Wielenga (2021)


Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai “troiku” challenge to take each line of original haiku and begin a new haiku.

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. hank77's avatar hank77
    Feb 04, 2021 @ 12:24:14

    kaykuala

    Love your take, lynn. Could immediately experience movements!

    Hank

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881
    Feb 04, 2021 @ 08:45:32

    Nicely done, Lynn!

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