roaring down the beach
at the height of winter waves
mist clouds
© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)
roaring down the beach
dangerous surf erases
beachcombers’ footprints
at the height of winter waves
surfers in wet suits compete
catch wave or wipe out
mist clouds
rise as waves surge against cliffs
salt spray drenches rocks
© Lynn Wielenga (2021)
Link to Carpe Diem Haiku Kai “troiku” challenge to take each line of original haiku and begin a new haiku.
a poem in my pocket 
Feb 04, 2021 @ 12:24:14
kaykuala
Love your take, lynn. Could immediately experience movements!
Hank
Feb 04, 2021 @ 12:46:32
I appreciate your feedback, Hank!
Feb 04, 2021 @ 08:45:32
Nicely done, Lynn!
Feb 04, 2021 @ 12:45:57
Thanks, Kim!