it’s good to create
energy in a marriage
a bit of spark adds
excitement to any
couple’s relationship
but negative energy
will backfire on itself;
wound like [bam]
agitated boomerang
or spring [zing]
like wristwatch too
tightly wound, no
longer
synchronized
in time
together.
Lillian challenges us to write a quadrille (44 words) using both pronunciations/meanings of “wound”. Join us at dVerse poets pub 🙂
a poem in my pocket 
Jun 06, 2021 @ 11:38:36
So real. Perspective. Provocative. Respective. Resonates.
On Mon, May 17, 2021, 6:10 PM a poem in my pocket wrote:
> lynn__ posted: ” it’s good to create energy in a marriage a bit of spark > adds excitement to any couple’s relationship but negative energy will > backfire on itself, wound like [bam] agitated boomerang or spring > [zing] like wristwatch too tightly wound, no longer s” >
Jun 06, 2021 @ 13:49:39
Thanks, Bethann…good to see you here!
May 22, 2021 @ 12:28:02
Engaging, thought provoking, helpful. Thank you.
May 24, 2021 @ 12:06:41
I appreciate your comment!
May 20, 2021 @ 16:17:38
Always here for positive energy and love!!! Have a good weekend.
May 22, 2021 @ 12:23:13
You too Grace 🙂
May 19, 2021 @ 16:57:40
I liked the words of your blog, hope we follow each other
May 19, 2021 @ 17:00:44
Thanks, Mina I will check out your blog too.
May 19, 2021 @ 15:46:53
Goodness, that’s quite a style you’ve presented. Nice physical organization, excellent playful language. There’s a nice beat to – a cycle to return to and attempting to synchronize.
May 19, 2021 @ 17:01:29
I appreciate your comments, Masa!