disturbing appetite

palely colored

bulbous abdomenIMG_1337

of barn arachnid

curls like gray sack

drawstrung by eight

delicately jointed

and banded legs

poised on sticky orb

of doorway deathtrap;

four legs hold fly still

for fangs to clamp

down as spider

lingers long over

breakfast of blood


I dislike spiders but my muse lingers on arachnid theme so here’s another one for dVerse poets’ Monday quadrille (44 words) with Linda Lee Lyberg.

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  1. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander
    Sep 22, 2021 @ 07:24:49

    Scary❣️

    -David

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  2. Dora's avatar Dora
    Sep 21, 2021 @ 10:03:55

    Lynn,
    Your descriptive prowess, esp. “gray sack/drawstrung,” is so mesmerizingly engaging until “breakfast of blood” brings it to a gruesome close. Loved it.
    pax,
    dora

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  3. Xan's avatar Xan
    Sep 21, 2021 @ 08:51:16

    Ok, if your goal was to make my skin crawl, mission accomplished!

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