whose eyes are windows to the soul
why do dark orbs seem lifeless?
where does one go to find comfort
when look away, turn inward?
cannot escape matrix of mind
confused thoughts circle nowhere
conflicted feelings cloud the heart
consequences prove painful
leave parents; later, spouse and home
lean into self-reliance
learned fear of real intimacy
lest empty self be disclosed
force cannot move one to love or
form friendships deeper than surface
for communication requires
foundational integrity
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Traditional Mongolian Meter requires quatrains written in lines of 7 to 8 syllables, each line head-rhymed with alliteration being a prominent element of the form. Grace at dVerse explains a head-rhyme as being “the first consonant of each line matching.
a poem in my pocket 
Oct 10, 2022 @ 21:18:03
Touching words from a heart finding its way in a new reality.
Oct 12, 2022 @ 14:38:04
Yes, exactly! thank YOU, Janice 🙂
Oct 12, 2022 @ 19:43:57
Too many of us have walked this path with our families.
Oct 09, 2022 @ 19:51:46
Wise words in head-rhymed splendor, Lynn. I think this is the diagnosis for many a failed relationship.
Oct 12, 2022 @ 14:38:54
I appreciate your comments, Dora!
Oct 09, 2022 @ 02:41:44
I Love this. 👏
Oct 09, 2022 @ 14:57:40
Thank you, Selma…we’re made for connection!