triolet nicaraguanse

life may seem perfect in paradise

but don’t drink the agua in managua

when you travel abroad, cheles, be wise

life may seem perfect in paradise

both piety and poverty wear a disguise

tourist trap market maze sells smells of iguana

life may seem perfect in paradise

but don’t drink the agua in managua

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“Agua” is water and “cheles” refers to light-skinned people. A triolet is a poem with 8 lines and ABaAabAB rhyme/repeat scheme.

13 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 02, 2023 @ 08:23:00

    that water may be a bit unhealthy… but don’t blame the iguana

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  2. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Apr 01, 2023 @ 12:24:20

    Love the rhymes! Wonderfully done, Lynn..

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  3. boz bozeman's avatar boz bozeman
    Mar 31, 2023 @ 10:38:24

    Wow! A very real accounting of all the sides to a “paradise”.

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  4. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Mar 31, 2023 @ 07:25:29

    Well done, Lynn.

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  5. Rob Kistner's avatar Rob Kistner
    Mar 31, 2023 @ 05:07:46

    Donโ€™t drink the wawa in Managua โ€” got it Lynnโ€ฆ โœŒ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. triciasankey's avatar Tricia Sankey
    Mar 30, 2023 @ 16:31:46

    I’ll take your word and steer clear! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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  7. Linda Lee Lyberg's avatar Linda Lee Lyberg
    Mar 30, 2023 @ 15:20:22

    Love it! Especially- ‘the agua in Managua.’ Now I am wondering what an iguana smells like!

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