neigh of neighbors

busy husband beavering
with wood in a back shed
mothers catting back and forth
to catch young kits for bed
grandma rabbiting about
in garden’s warm black dirt
brothers squirrel round a tree
till one falls and gets hurt
sisters lark on swingset
sing songs with silly words
wee early morning’s quiet
except for beetling birds

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Sarah’s poetics prompt to use animal nouns as verbs…i had fun with rhymes as well 🙂

33 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    May 31, 2023 @ 14:06:03

    I enjoyed this, Lynn! So much happening here…I can imagine a busy, happy family.

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  2. kim881's avatar kim881
    May 31, 2023 @ 02:30:30

    The rhythm and rhyme of your poem remind me of that old Bob Dylan song, Subterranean Homesick Blues, Lynn. What a lot of activity in one poem! You’ve packed in so many animal verbs – I particularly love the mothers ‘catting back and forth’ and the ‘beetling birds’!

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  3. sarahsouthwest's avatar sarahsouthwest
    May 31, 2023 @ 02:27:29

    So much energy here! It’s pretty hectic. The animal verbs are so well chosen, I think they add a lot of extra energy and colour.

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  4. rog's avatar rog
    May 31, 2023 @ 01:35:18

    really enjoyed this

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  5. Becoming His Tapestry's avatar Becoming His Tapestry
    May 30, 2023 @ 21:23:07

    Love everything about this poem, enjoyed how you used name of animals as verbs

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  6. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin
    May 30, 2023 @ 20:45:43

    This is fantastic. I’ve never bee-d like this before. What fun. I really like this. All of it. Yay!

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  7. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    May 30, 2023 @ 20:39:15

    Very well done, Lynn. I love it!

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  8. Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr's avatar Ken Gierke / rivrvlogr
    May 30, 2023 @ 17:54:15

    Well done!

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  9. lillian's avatar lillian
    May 30, 2023 @ 16:51:13

    I LOVE this! I think it could become a children’s song! 🙂

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  10. Ron.'s avatar Ron.
    May 30, 2023 @ 16:30:47

    Multiple masterfully presented aniverbs! Salute!

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