garretson, south dakota

https://www.roadsideamerica.com/story/17917

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chased hard by sheriff’s posse, after robbing bank,

outlaw on horseback heads for cave at split rock creek

where sioux quartzite cliffs rise along stony banks and

narrow at devil’s gulch…chasm where jesse james jumped!

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The Imayo* – Japanese form structure:

– 4 lines (8 lines permissible)
– 12 syllables per line divided as 7/5
– make a pause space between the 7 and 5 syllables
– use comma, caesura or kireji (cutting word) as the pause
– no rhymes, no meter, no end of line pauses
– the whole should flow together as though one long sentence

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Link to MTB with Laura Bloomsbury at dVerse Poets pub.


16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. janicead's avatar janicead
    Jul 16, 2023 @ 11:14:22

    Wonderful history lesson in so few lines.

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  2. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 09:11:45

    My! My first time hearing if this. You wrote a glorious poem. Way to go, Lynn. 👏🏽

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  3. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 08:53:27

    Nicely done, Jay. Love the throwback western.

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  4. merrildsmith's avatar merrildsmith
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 06:51:00

    That is such a cool site, and I like that you wove the legend into your poem.

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  5. Melissa Lemay's avatar Melissa Lemay
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 06:23:32

    Love this, Lynn.❤️

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  6. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 04:44:37

    A historical legendary Imayo, Lynn! I had no idea about Jesse James’s leap at Devil’s Gulch.

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jul 14, 2023 @ 02:00:57

    What a story… I have never learned the details about the outlaws.

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