blind date

Her best friend set Bella up to meet her cousin, Jude, for a date. “He’s very good-looking and a real charmer. In fact, if he wasn’t my cousin, I’d want to go out with him myself!”

“OOOhh, I can’t believe it, I’m finally going to meet him! What should I wear? How will I do my hair? Where do we meet?” Bella bubbled over with anticipation. She desperately wanted to impress this guy.

“I suggest a short skirt and hair down, softly curled. He will be waiting for you in the park, on a bench near the fountain. I’ll drop you off and you can call me later.”

That day, Bella walked up to him and said, breathlessly, “Hey, Jude! To be pretty for you I have dropped two seeds of turnsole in the dark of both eyes. Now I am truly blind.”


Prosery for dVerse prompt must be 144 words and include this line from Isabel Duarte-Gray’s poem, Garden: “To be pretty for you I have dropped two seeds of turnsole in the dark of both eyes.”

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  1. SelmaMartin's avatar SelmaMartin
    Oct 05, 2023 @ 04:37:24

    How cleverly you added the prompt words in this story. Adore your style. Thanks, Lynn. 💕

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  2. Sherry Marr's avatar Sherry Marr
    Sep 12, 2023 @ 18:22:44

    Ha, this is perfect! I LOVE the ending. Truly blind indeed.

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