on the mountain

son of the promise
carries bundle of kindling
for required sacrifice

his faithful father
bears heavier burden
of patriarchal love

a fire burning hot
in his chest rises to this
high pinnacle of trust

son willingly lays life
down, to be bound; back
arched on rough dry wood

wide eyes close tight
as boy draws a final breath,
bares his throat to the knife

trembling hand halts midair
when angel calls out
“Abraham, STOP!”

Look, the Lord provides
substitute ram for the altar;
its blood is shed instead

as a foreshadow of Christ,
when Father’s promised Son
comes as our Lamb of sacrifice

God’s covenant renewal
inspires radical obedience
which results in greater blessing.

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I first wrote this in 2020 for our church candlelight service of Lessons & Carols.

27 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ordinary Person's avatar Ordinary Person
    Dec 08, 2023 @ 15:34:54

    A beautiful biblical poem. Definitely foreshadows the death of Christ on a cross who took our sins upon himself.

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  2. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Dec 08, 2023 @ 10:36:45

    A beautifull written poem, Lynn. It reads like Psalm. Very well done.

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