familial conundrum

consider fathers and sons,
some have history of hurt:
angry words, intimidation
insecurities, manipulation
of different personalities
and modes of operation
which seem “wrong” but
simply manifest divergent
yet not so simple after all
hurts can build thick wall
will bricks be broken down?
relationship survive rubble?

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Linking to dVerse poetics hosted by Kim with theme of “endings”. I chose to end my poem with questions because there’s uncertainty how relationship troubles might endif they do.

12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. pvcann's avatar pvcann
    Sep 23, 2024 @ 09:56:27

    Sadly true Lynn, I have seen it, and I love your ending, great question.

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  2. Grace's avatar Grace
    Sep 19, 2024 @ 19:44:20

    Hopefully it can be repaired. That hurts can indeed build thick walls.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 19, 2024 @ 07:52:07

    There is a hereditary aspect of it also.

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Sep 19, 2024 @ 03:16:15

    A great choice of questions to end your familial conundrum, Lynn. Coincidentally, a friend came to visit yesterday and we were discussing our own familial conundrums, and it’s not just fathers and sons who have ‘history of hurt’.

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  5. Lisa or Li's avatar msjadeli
    Sep 18, 2024 @ 22:28:30

    Good questions, Lynn.

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  6. M's avatar M
    Sep 18, 2024 @ 20:10:09

    I’m fortunate that my sons and I have good relationships. Now that they have passed adolescence ~

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