chill & ague

Kim at dVerse prompts us to write poetry from an optician’s chart using a line of four words in order. The words I used in tanka form are: nose–one–cause–even

my nose is running
its race against sinuses
stiff sniff not enough
one sneeze will cause a series
using even more tissSHOOS!

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ain - UA's avatar Ain
    Feb 03, 2025 @ 11:53:59

    Ha! Woes brought to the page…

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  2. Kim of Glover Gardens's avatar Kim of Glover Gardens
    Feb 01, 2025 @ 21:12:33

    You made my husband’s reality poetic!

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  3. Grace's avatar Grace
    Jan 31, 2025 @ 19:39:57

    I hope you feel better. I hate it when my nose is running.

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Jan 31, 2025 @ 11:17:05

    Clever use of sibilance, Lynn, and the internal rhyme of ‘stiff sniff’ made me smile.

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  5. pvcann's avatar pvcann
    Jan 31, 2025 @ 08:38:54

    This I know

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Jan 31, 2025 @ 08:19:27

    Oh…not easy to cope with a cold like that.

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