listen to silence

Snow falls noiselessly from a windless sky, alighting on back deck and fence post, shed roof and fallow field. We can feel the gathering of snowflakes but cannot hear their conversation. Rabbit tracks crisscross white breast of winter.

Spring crocus push through snow’s crust soundlessly, if not effortlessly. Green spears surround the hardy stem. Bright purple petals display golden stamen and pistil. Life is determined to bloom and reproduce beauty.

Dark eyes watch intently, soft nose wriggles. Wild rabbit moves stealthily on fur-boot feet. No rustle of leaf, no snap of stick, just a flicker of movement and flash of cotton-ball tail. First a twitch, then a hop, final sprint beneath spruce.

earth tilts toward sun
far side of moon holds silence
seasons change places

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Haibun Monday at dVerse Poets, hosted by Frank Tassone

19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. pvcann's avatar pvcann
    May 04, 2026 @ 10:41:59

    I like that you locate silence in nature, a beautiful reflection.

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  2. yvettemcalleiro's avatar yvettemcalleiro
    May 02, 2026 @ 13:49:24

    Beautiful haibun, Lynn!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  3. purplepeninportland's avatar purplepeninportland
    May 01, 2026 @ 19:59:01

    I love your haiku!

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  4. Jennifer Wagner's avatar Jennifer Wagner
    Apr 28, 2026 @ 18:18:09

    This is lovely, Lynn.

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  5. Dora's avatar Dora
    Apr 28, 2026 @ 14:42:10

    I love the stillness of the scene but with so much going on in the silence. Silence does not mean absence of life, as you beautifully show. 🙂

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Apr 28, 2026 @ 12:52:50

    The silent winter I resonate a lot with… especially after experiencing it closely.

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  7. kim881's avatar kim881
    Apr 28, 2026 @ 02:20:14

    I love how you describe the silence of snow, Lynn, and the beauty of spring flowers – the rabbit was s lovely surprise. Your haiku is beautiful,

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    • lynn__'s avatar lynn__
      Apr 28, 2026 @ 09:14:40

      Thank you, Kim. I think snow absorbs sound so it creates a deeper silence? A rabbit and I surprised each other on the front porch recently 🙂

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  8. jaerose37's avatar jaerose37
    Apr 27, 2026 @ 21:29:53

    What a wonderful exploration of what it means to feel silence in harmony with nature – Jae

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  9. Maggie's avatar Maggie
    Apr 27, 2026 @ 21:24:10

    I can relate to this

    “earth tilts toward sunfar side of moon holds silenceseasons change places”

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