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Marry me in the same small town church where my parents married. I’ll wear my mother’s sleeveless wedding dress, featuring lacey arm gauntles and wide hoop skirt covered in lace. Shall I wear a hat or veil? My bridesmaids will wear peach street-length dresses and carry sheer parasols.

You will be handsome in broad-shouldered ivory tux trimmed in dark brown. Mother says no cowboy boots! Our brothers, as groomsmen, will wear brown tuxedos with matching bowties. Your nephew can bear the rings on a pillow and my cousin’s daughter can walk down aisle dropping rose petals.

Let’s decorate dais like a garden with latticed arch and baskets of mums. The church ladies can serve barbecue beef on buns with potato salad, frozen fruit cups, and wedding cake. After our reception, you can drive us away in antique buggy, proudly pulled by your horse, Ginger. We must keep our final destination secret!

on lawn of stone church

congratulations and punch

spill like summer petals

Linking to dVerse poets where Mish hosts haibuns on wedding bliss. My husband and I celebrated our 43rd anniversary this past weekend!

21 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. kaykuala's avatar kaykuala
    Sep 02, 2026 @ 17:05:10

    It’s great lynn, you’ve described of every little details on the wedding day. Laughed at the 2 humorous comments, one, Ginger pulling the antique buggy and two, having to keep the destination secret when being pulled by a slow coach. Well done Ma;am!

    Hank

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  2. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Sep 02, 2026 @ 16:35:15

    Happy Anniversary Lynn! :>)

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  3. rothpoetry's avatar rothpoetry
    Sep 02, 2026 @ 16:34:09

    This is written so beautifully, Lynn. Your wedding sounds wonderful! So full of life and memories, both then and now!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
    Sep 01, 2026 @ 12:56:03

    Lovely anniversery and the secret destination is a great closing to the prose

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  5. thetigressawakens's avatar thetigressawakens
    Sep 01, 2026 @ 12:27:11

    What a wonderful anniversary poem, Lynn! Sounds like its been a lovely 43 years! 🧡

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  6. Mish's avatar Mish
    Sep 01, 2026 @ 09:45:40

    I love the approach you took to this haibun with “Marry me…” , all the details, topped off with a gorgeous haiku. Congrats!

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  7. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander
    Sep 01, 2026 @ 08:01:56

    MAZAL TOV! ❤

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  8. kim881's avatar kim881
    Sep 01, 2026 @ 05:04:22

    Congratulations on 43 years of marriage, Lynn!

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  9. Maggie's avatar Maggie
    Aug 31, 2026 @ 23:23:42

    Happy anniversary 🎉 💗

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