in this moment

1.

feathery iridescence of blue, green, gold
swirling eyes layered upon eyes, fibonacci-style
mated pair of peacocks scream from roof

2.

leave library book on faded blanket
gingerly hop across hot sand to waterline
wash toes in surf, rehydrate sun-baked skin

3.

rains drench thirst of harvest-ravaged fields
generous showers puddle on pavement
oiled rainbows warn of hydroplaning

4.

turtles, toads, and snakes slumber
underground, beneath deep snow-dunes
ants feel vibrations of slowed heartbeats

5.

daughter-in-love paints family tree
portraits on wall change like seasons
wish we could hang together forever


The cadralor is a hybridized name from the 2 inventors, Lori Howe and Christopher Cadra. This poetry style features:
– 5 numbered stanzas
– keep same stanza length throughout (3-10 lines)
– each stanza stands alone as an imagist poem (obliquest of connections)
– 5th stanza pulls the 4 unrelated stanzas together into a poem of love, of yearning
– rhymes and syllabic meter are NOT wanted

“Meeting the bar” night at dVerse Poets Pub where Laura hosts imagism in 5…

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Helen's avatar Helen
    Oct 19, 2026 @ 17:14:01

    Love your poem … incredibly visual … like a five panel tryptic.

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  2. Frewin55's avatar Frewin55
    Oct 18, 2026 @ 04:49:56

    I love the “daughter-in-love” – so much nicer than “in-law” and presumably describes that state of a relationship before marriage is mooted. Also, each stanza is a standalone poem, as specified, and is brought together in the fifth so bravo, Lynn!

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    • lynn__'s avatar lynn__
      Oct 18, 2026 @ 19:10:27

      Thank you very much for your thoughtful and encouraging comment…I have written my very first Cadralor and feel a sense of accomplishment 😊

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  3. Laura Bloomsbury's avatar Laura Bloomsbury
    Oct 16, 2026 @ 04:16:05

    that last line pulls the whole together and at the heartstrings too Lynn – lovely

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  4. kim881's avatar kim881
    Oct 16, 2026 @ 03:59:57

    So nicely written, Lynn. I especially love the peacocks, the puddles with their oiled rainbows, and ‘daughter-in-love’ is a delightful epithet!

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  5. shaun tenzenmen's avatar shaun tenzenmen
    Oct 16, 2026 @ 03:22:07

    The last two lines are very poignant Lynn 👏 Lovely write.

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  6. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged
    Oct 15, 2026 @ 22:10:43

    Lynn, love each vivid vignette, tied beautifully in the last one.

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