A tan renga challenge at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai…original haiku by Basho followed by 2-line renga response by me 🙂
slowly spring
is making an appearance
moon and plum
      fresh scent of opening buds
      wafts sweetly on white moonbeams

image from Pinterest
crane and feathers
in a black robe
clouds of flowers
      hungry crane dips into pond
      scattered petals float away
a traveler’s heart
it also should look like
chinquapin flowers
       chinese chestnut tree in bloom
      curious tendrils reach out
moon past full
the beginning of a little more
darkness
      gibbous seasons slowly change
      beauty ripens over time
moon and flowers
the stupidity pricked by a needle
entering the colder season
      stark white stars piercing black night
      sharpness in the evening chill
first frost
when mums start to feel chilly
I get a cotton waist warmer
      it’s time for scarves and sweaters
     spring buds’ whispered memory
Haiku © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Renga © lynn__
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