tan renga










echoes of the past

resound into the present

a dream of the sea.

heaven’s glory shone through gloom
so she left her shell behind.


Credit:  picture & prompt from Carpe Diem Haiku Kai 11-22-13

(haiku by OffTheTippet;  2nd verse added by me, in memory of my mother)

7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Chèvrefeuille
    Nov 25, 2013 @ 12:42:11

    Good day Lynn … what a beautiful continuation of this Tan Renga … I bow my head … chapeau! Welcome at our haiku-community. I am your host here. And I hope to see you here again.


    • lynndiane
      Nov 25, 2013 @ 17:35:55

      I wandered here from Bjorn’s blog…and was pulled in by the gorgeous photo. I’ve always loved haiku so I’ll probably be back. Thanks for the welcome and for hosting this site!


  2. atrm61
    Nov 25, 2013 @ 10:12:36

    What a wonderful tribute to your Mom-the last line is totally ,incredibly,beautiful!


  3. Sun
    Nov 25, 2013 @ 02:29:18

    very nice completion in honor of your mother – wonderful. ☺


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